open the door (for elsa)

years have past and i am still standing here,

out side the door,

waiting for you to just open the door,

i am still standing here singing,

"do u wanna build a snowman?".

Elsa please they say i have courage but i am tring to

i am right here for you

just let me in

i can't live without you

we are sisters

why can't you understand?

Author's Note

i just made this poem for elsa because i am a frozen fan!!

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

I love the 1st 5 lines, I feel like I could have said the same thing, though I did not, but when I read it I feel like it is me standing at this door saying do you want to build a snowman, there must be such a story behind it

years have past and i am still standing here,
out side the door,
waiting for you to just open the door,
i am still standing here singing,
"do u wanna build a snowman?".

Elsa is so popular, everyone loves her in my child's preschool class, all the girls in the class at least

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot i am glad you liked you liked it! actually i am 11 years old and i love frozen too so i thought to read a poem for it

[Bhumika Devkota]

I am a Frozen fan too! This has a good emotion shown. It is an great poem for Frozen.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks i am a frozen too

[bee]

Elsa is very popular. And this is very close to heart, it seems though I am standing there.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot i am glad you liked it :)

[bee]

Welcome :)