Strong enough

01:09 PM 6/8/2020

time is gone so i should too be gone

i am fine in the morning, not next to you

cold in December i ran into drew his name is funny to me

i always have fun with screws

mine is ours

that is clear enough to do

all is all i can give 

just to get close to you

i remember clear sky

bitter baby blue

bright lies bitter serious violent fume

i wonder and then i see bright lies

 if you will ever come again to let me know who won sides

but time will pass and i should have knew

laced in my palm is a decision i forgot to loom

i make a problem and break in hate and f*****g disaster in haste

i see a new beginning and the end is coming too

soon i shall bite the cut

of rotten distaste

see my face see my glue i seem and sew a new one for you

centered in the aroma of million little lies gone little too few

powdered prune perfume

you were everything i wanted

isn't that enough?

not even, he needs permission to come into

the bypass of my heart meets brain met you

i wanted my heart and now dry

bleeding raw i try and try and try

Reviews

[T.S. Ulmus]

I like the imagery of sewing a new face "centered in the aroma of a million little lies". It's a good line. I've read everything that you've posted here, twice, and you have flashes of brilliance. You haven't done much rhyming, but here it seems to come so naturally to you, even some internal rhymes which read very smoothly, and that's hard to do. I look forward to seeing your progression as an artist.

[cheyenne s garcia]

i appreciate your kind words !