Quiet Moments

Quiet Moments

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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Quiet Moments

 

Sunlight beaming through the slanted shutters

Tiny dancing dust particles floating mid-air

Underneath desk a sleeping dog snores

Vanishing baby dreams

In my quiet moments, they haunt me

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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This suggests to me infertility problems "Vanishing baby dreams In my quiet moments, they haunt me" the grieving womb for the child that never was or could be. This is the saddest thing in all creation the woman who desires to bear a child but is unable to. A peaceful and otherwise enjoyable day except for the pain of the unfulfilled womb. This one really hit me. exceptional write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Very peaceful and momentarily beautiful...ENJOYED. : )

Posted 9 Years Ago


kinda confusing message here but still good :)


100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice flow! Great job(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this poem. It flows easily and is nice to read :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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oh very descriptive!! "tiny dancing dust particles floating mid-air" - I love that! it has a kind of ethereal first few lines but then the subtle poignance hits you in the last 2 lines, the reality of it and the sadness!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was awesome.. Great peice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like it very good. Good Job.

-SkyeBlanco-

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cute..!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awesome. Really felt like a Japanese style poem (Which I, ofcourse, love). Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


simple and beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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