locket love

locket love

A Poem by Marie Harrison
"

free verse love poem

"

locket love

 

your tender caress

leaves me

in urgent duress

 

for I'm parched

so

thirsty for more

 

each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time

 

       four

             three

                     two

                           one

 

                               

                              shoot me off to

                              the moon after you lift off

 

 

my heart

was tucked

deep inside

your blue

denim pocket

 

from the

moment

you gave me

my first gold

locket with

your picture

inside

 

so you could

ride along

being strung

on my gold chain

only to

be near my

heart box

 

even when we

are physically apart

your golden locket

is a part of me

now

reminding

me who

carries my

heart in their

blue jean pocket

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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each time we part

my engine powers up

like a NASA space rocket

counting down

till that orgasmic

blast off time



four

three

two

one





shoot me off to

the moon after you lift off

... these lines are brilliant!!! ... the poem is sheer genius!!! ... it's awesome to read you ... this verse is so creative ... moving ... passionate and enchanting ... what a lovely read ... :) ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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very chic and very cool! i like the language herein, it is clever and descriptive. nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


this poem is too long, dear. Do you have another to send in? If so, send to [email protected]

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is how I feel sometime when I haven't spoken to my lady for a time sometimes an hour sometimes a day sometimes an instant!
you have described this well a good and accurate write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool yaa..!!!! Good shot..!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such a powerful poem with great imagery :) Excellent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"your tender caress
leaves me
in urgent duress"

Awe, you po' thing ;)


Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the lines

carries my

heart in their

blue jean pocket

Posted 8 Years Ago


Like the space rocket in there love, makes the reader feel the intensity of love and lust even more! Adds such vibrancy!
xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


that was nice ^-^ (but the first part scared me a bit D:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


You have such power of word choice, arrangement. Your meaning comes through clearly. from your heart. Beautiful. Sensual. I look forward to reading more!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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