Beginnings Of Trouble

Beginnings Of Trouble

A Chapter by Marie Harrison

A poem of passion.
































Beginnings Of Trouble


Forbidden ripe fruit;

sin-filled kisses taste so good,
betrayal has won.

© 2010 Marie Harrison

Author's Note

Marie Harrison
Forbidden love is delicious, but the beginnings of trouble too.

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A well written haiku......

Posted 12 Years Ago

short and bitter sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago

To some the forbidden is always best. Me, I like the norm, the non-forbidden. LOL. Great work. There's an intensity to this. Great work.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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so true..unfortunately..

Posted 12 Years Ago

Ultimately sad. The excitement has led to downfall. And what happens next? Usually forbidden fruit is the first to rot.

Posted 12 Years Ago

These few, true words demonstrate the deepest weaknesses inside us. They say: Absolute power leads to absolute corruption. And it is likewise with the human spirit. Giving in fully to the body, earthly desires only results in a very dark, horrifying fall for our cores. A fall that is contagious to the ones around. Like a plague. Although I find the quick submission in the last line a bit scary, I liked the truth in it. Thanks for sharing.


Posted 12 Years Ago

Oh yes, the forbidden fruit, better not to taste, it only leads to trouble!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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ah... If only... Honor keeps that beast betrayal at bay, much to the chagrin of a good friend of mine. Of course, we couldn't have it any other way. This one works.

Posted 12 Years Ago

And your saying this was just the begining? ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Well, this is short, but really nice!
Tate of the poem is nice, my feeling after reading is ...
I don't Know.
Nice Poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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22 Reviews
Added on October 5, 2010
Last Updated on October 21, 2010
Tags: Passion, Senyru, Fruit, Kisses, Trouble


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..


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