Beginnings Of Trouble

Beginnings Of Trouble

A Chapter by Marie Harrison

A poem of passion.
































Beginnings Of Trouble


Forbidden ripe fruit;

sin-filled kisses taste so good,
betrayal has won.

© 2010 Marie Harrison

Author's Note

Marie Harrison
Forbidden love is delicious, but the beginnings of trouble too.

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That sure says it all! This is great. Temptation that can't be resisted.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is great.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I hate when betrayal wins.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Silly funny, the win came from the taste. Nice read.

Posted 9 Years Ago

so sensuous and enticing, this here is passionate and the image gives
the entirety a brilliant effect, the poem itself is tantalyzing,
i really enjoyed this poem, yummy, thanks for sharing your talent,

Posted 9 Years Ago

As it mostly does...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Hmm is that scary music I hear?

Haha(: Good Job!!(:

Posted 9 Years Ago

Oh man...trouble is a comin!

Posted 9 Years Ago

yes , most definitely

Posted 9 Years Ago

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22 Reviews
Added on October 5, 2010
Last Updated on October 21, 2010
Tags: Passion, Senyru, Fruit, Kisses, Trouble


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..


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