Paranormal Air

A paranormal writing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Paranormal Air

With a slight

Chill of the air

Or suddenly

Waking-up

From the feel

Of a cold stare

 

Instantly you

Know something

Paranormal

Is over there

 

Should you scream?

Should you cry?

 

You could run

But it can 

Probably fly

 

Even if

It is silly

Give it a try

And run like

Hell

 

Before it

Lays it's

Hands upon you

Or casts an

Evil spell on

You forever

 

Don't be

Ashamed if

It whispers

In your ear

And piss

Trickles down

Your legs

Like tears

 

Even the bravest

Of men turn to

Jelly whenever a

Ghost is near

 

 

Reviews

[Frank F. Atanacio]

very good quiet haunting of a right I enjoyed this read thank you for sharing Frank :)

[Molafvt]

There was one Ghost for sure that "almost" made me piss my pants. She left a lasting impression on me, so much so I've been trying to finish the damn story for two years now....Maybe before I die? LOL Hey Marie, I love to read your paranormal stuff. This one really hit a note for me. You have such a pure, direct style. Kind of reminds me of the way I write. How is life moving along for you sweety? Your work certainly is.........!
Love, Murray

[Wondering Mind]

I'm starting to fear your ability to capture well a " creepy" concept...

[Star Wolf]

Awesome, this gave me the chills just reading it!

[Lauren Beth]

Nice write...you really do capture that creepy feeling that you get sometimes...like someone is there but then you turn and nothing there...love the whole thing- I enjoyed reading it.

[Sean M. Addams]

liked this alot ..ghost have always fascinated me and I thought you did great with the imagery and detail of creating that creepy atmosphere that they give us ..nice job on this ..

[Dark Empress]

Awesome! I love the description in it. Amazing write. I love everything about it. :)