Balanced
A Poem by
Marie Harrison
A tranquil poem.
Balanced
Breathing in
Breathing out
No thoughts come in
No thoughts come out
Focusing on breathing
Is all that’s required
Crystal clear is my mind
Peaceful is my soul
Happy is my heart
© 2010 Marie Harrison
Author's Note
I've recently started regularly meditating. The results are amazing. I'm loving it!
Reviews
At first it seemed a little sad, but as I read on...I was
on the path to a serene calm. Thanks for taking the
edge off Sweet Marie!
Posted 13 Years Ago
you capture the elements of meditation perfectly...
Posted 13 Years Ago
you capture the elements of meditation perfectly...
that was actually a relaxing poem good job :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
that was actually a relaxing poem good job :)
steady poem!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
steady poem!!
This is very calming. I love it! Thanks for sharing. May have to try meditating. Maybe right before bed.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is very calming. I love it! Thanks for sharing. May have to try meditating. Maybe right before bed.
You should really try it underwater... It's great...especially in a shower... Don't ask me how I could think that, I just do... Moving on... Serenity; we've found it here.
Posted 13 Years Ago
You should really try it underwater... It's great...especially in a shower... Don't ask me how I could think that, I just do... Moving on... Serenity; we've found it here.
really great! so relaxing and a refreshing read...i was breathing in & out right along with you!
Posted 13 Years Ago
really great! so relaxing and a refreshing read...i was breathing in & out right along with you!
this is great!
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is great!
Interesting poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Interesting poem.
I enjoy the calming sensation of this write. Perfect write once again my friend.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I enjoy the calming sensation of this write. Perfect write once again my friend.
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Added on November 1, 2010
Last Updated on November 1, 2010
Author
Marie Harrison Atlanta, GA
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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance.
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