The Note

A library poem for Team Renfield.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Note

Back in the dusty toe

Of the library cove

Was where we would go

Not with any books in tow

Just the need to let love grow

With you I would lose all control

 

Every once and

a while we

Would leave each

other sensual love notes.

 

Years later I went back

After my divorce just

To satisfy my curiosity

That was about

To make me choke.

 

Back in the corner of the cove

In our old Gray’s Anatomy Book

Was where I saw my latest love note,

 

You left your name

Your email address

And your handsome

Picture for an

Old bloke.

 

My heart leaped for joy

When I saw your note.

 

Reviews

[M Garcia]

This was wonderful. A love poem that says it all.

[Dark Empress]

Awesome poem. Beautifully written :) I really enjoyed reading this.

[JanieB]

Real sweet love poem.

[Wondering Mind]

very creative plot for prompt. Nicely done.

[tynamite]

That makes sense. Once someone loves someone, they love them forever, even if they are no good. Everyone says that. That reminds me of my parent's relationship, and everyone else's. Love is blind. Well you know what they say, "It's better to of loved and lost, than to of never of loved at all."

Why are there so many aspects to love? It's like people can never run out of love songs or poems to write, like there's so many topics.

[sarah]

THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOO FRGGING ROMANTIC!!!!!!!

[Tina Kline]

How wonderful, very very romantic. Hope she follows up on the email address.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem. I enjoyed it alot.

[Norma M Sutton]

Oh my . . .

So sweet it makes me wanna gag. Or maybe it's the dust, but I doubt it. ;P