Red Dawn

Red Dawn

A Poem by Marie Harrison

A poem of death.










Red Dawn

Color of life, red;

Chthonian king wears deep red,

By your bed he waits.


© 2010 Marie Harrison

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Life red .. bright, daring, energetic, dangerous .. great

Posted 10 Years Ago

Amazing... I like it short and sweet

Posted 10 Years Ago

Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Cool, and o so Aries!

The senryu suits your insta-splash sensibility. The form favors vital energy and/or koan subtlety.

This immediacy of this piece is sexual but integral -- again your Aries NOW sense summons vividness, a sense of urgency, and clarity all at once. A powerful asset.

You use both the implicit and explicit quality of RED consistently well throughout your work.

The impassioned multitiered alertness of this piece is Zen.

Posted 10 Years Ago

nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Nice Marie, well done..

Posted 10 Years Ago

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I love the last line. This is a great hyperbole of the sun.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is great. I love the picture. The words accompanying it are just wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is rather eerie, the red could be screaming danger!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love your hikue's they are always so good!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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25 Reviews
Added on November 12, 2010
Last Updated on November 12, 2010
Tags: Senyru, Death, Red, Image


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..


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