Dream Reflections

A poem about about falling asleep.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dream Reflections

 

So drained,

I feel like a trained monkey

Who is paid to dance

 

I can't wait for

The chance to sleep

If it doesn't

Happen soon

Grim reaper might come

Knocking at my door

When I fall asleep

 Driving home

 

I shall visit the moors of

Ancient fairies and

Hills of enchantment,

Once my curly head lands

On my feather pillow

 

I might dream of lazy days

Laying under a weeping willow tree

After taking a long dip in a cool

Stream on a hot summer day

 

Who knows where my

Subconscious might take me,

Good thing my

Admission will be free,

Because I don't have a

Penny on me currently

 

Time is ticking so swiftly

 These trying days,

I must say goodbye,

Before I drift off to

Dreamland too suddenly

 

Goodnight

Reviews

[Liza]

this is a great way to fall asleep - its exciting yet calming

[tynamite]

I like how it's written in a sleepy way.

[Jibey]

I liked the flow of this, the sense of longing for release... of hoping for better times... It worked well, for me...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I shall visit the moors of
Ancient fairies and
Hills of enchantment,
Once my curly head lands
On my feather pillow

Sleep is good in so many ways, resting the body and escaping reality with dreams... life is crazy and peaceful mentality is the solution. My favorite verse is above.