Forever My Muse

Romance poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Forever My Muse”

A charming muse

You are,

My Sweet

 

In my dreams

Always smiling at me

With your dimples

 

As I sleep in peace

Forever I’ll see you

Walking with me

Along the windy beach shores

Collecting sandy sea treasures

 

Waking in the morn

I’ll forever weep,

Asking when shall I feel

You gently

Rest my head against

Your beating chest again

 

How will you

spend hours

Sketching the curvy

Shadows of my body

To hang like art

As you did before

 

When it rages

With storms outdoors

I still worry

You’ll melt like

Powdered sugar

On my tongue

 

In a crowd of people

I find myself

Still searching for your

Masculine face and tall form

 

In my sleep

I always

Smell your fresh

Amber wood scent

As I feel your warm

Hands cupping my breasts

 

Forever I’ll seek

Inspiration for life

From my memories

Of you

 

I’ll always see you

Guiding me through life, my Love

 

With your body

I fit like a glove

 

 

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

this was beautiful work, i really like this. it's been so long since i last reviewed your poems haha, but they're still as well-written as i remembered. great!!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. A beautiful poem of love and contentment. When the love is good. Best days in a life. I like the perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Abbie]

Very sweet and simple

[Jibey]

This was exquisite and intensely poignant... How well you capture the longing of lost love, and the beauty of sensations that linger in the mind and float around the warm body that longs for the touch of fingers that caress, of lips that press...

[AloysiaVerben]

Excellent! I love this piece. Totally off topic though: I love the font :) Good work.

[Rossen]

With lines like ''You’ll melt like Powdered sugar on my tongue"
You will have dyslexics like me lining up to read. hmmm I think
It's time to read more from your corner.

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Excellent piece with emotions with a sensual flair. Great job.

[Norma M Sutton]

Nicely worded and full of pictures.

[JanieB]

Really nice.
I adore the words "You'll melt like powdered sugar on my tongue".. so beautiful.

[Mauricio Montoya]

love is in the air. good job.