Companions

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Companions

 

Soft warm hand to hold

One to bring morning coffee

Laughter to enjoy

Author's Note

I wrote this senyru with my parents in mind. To me they are great examples of companionship.

Reviews

[Michael Davis]

Very uplifting and sweet. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very wonderful poem, love the meaning!

[Linear]

Soft warm hand to hold
the other to enfold
to bring in morning coffee
live a life thats bold.


So ok im not so good with Senryu, but you are magnificent :o)

[The Analog Kid]

This is sweet. It reminds me of my parents too. I could take some lessons from them:)

[tynamite]

This is lovely.

[~Princess~]

I love this poem it made me think od my late grandmother and my grandpa his still living i miss her much tho. Terriffic job hun

[M.Babu]

this is just amazing. The sentiment in the brevity is tribute enough for those 'companions' who live and love each other for years and decades to come. These type of people are rapidly dying away as fewer and fewer believe in their power to go the millionth mile. I'm grateful you shared this with me.
Touching piece

[Robin]

nice !

[Tina Kline]

Very loving and the reason we all want close and loving companions in our life. I really like this one a lot!

[D.J. Lutz]

Beautiful.