Snow Cone

Snow Cone

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A summer poem

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Snow Cone

Lime green, sweet snow cone

Your tangy taste takes me home

 

Back to the days when I was so carefree

 To jump in the pool after your mind numbing freeze

 

You bring me pleasure

You make me smile

One taste of you

 Takes me a million miles

 

You leave me with a fluorescent grin

You make me feel young again

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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What a perfectly timed finished.

Nice job on this.

~M.Babu~

Posted 8 Years Ago


sounds good right now!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lovely. Brings back memories for sure, the kind where you could run outside for hours in bare feet and burn yourself severely on metal playground equipment. Memories for sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago


oh i like this it sounds delious

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweet and innocent write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Awww those were the days, young, carefree, and eating those snow cones.
Loved this piece, made my warm day feel a little cooler.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Snow cones are wonderful on a warm day and remind me of the county fair. Thank you for such a great memory. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


'fluorescent grin' what a nice way to put it :)
This was so cute :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great cool refreshing poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this because I loe snow cones. Excellent job!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2011
Last Updated on July 23, 2011
Tags: Summer, Snow Cones

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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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