Broken Dream

I had a dream where you weren't broken and I had slayed all your demons. From inside of you shown a light brighter than the stars and in your eyes all the fears subsided. In that moment the rain started fall, I picked a rain drop from the air and laid it upon your lips. Without hesitation I brushed back your silken hair and kissed your rain drenched lips. I stopped just for a moment and looked into your eyes and was taken to where time stood still. It was her emerald universe with all of her happiest moments and I was just a spectator of her splender. I saw all that makes her tick, no little guy behind all the gears turning them, but a power that can't be spoken but has to be seen. I was brought back when her gaze broke mine and she had seen sonething that scared her. I knew then that he was coming for me and I grabbed her kissing her with all that was in me. Before he took me, I told her not to let this dream end and this could be your reality and then I woke up.

Reviews

[Dancing_Elixir]

.... and then I woke up. You should have fallen back asleep and dominated the end of the dream.

[Matching Socks]

I echo everything Chris said. : )

[Chris Micha]

:) thank you so much my dear!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

We dream the dreams they dream of us... until the awakening. So beautiful, so sad, so mysterious. It is to be savored, appreciated and pondered.

100 dreaming dreams

[Chris Micha]

Wow...thank you so much! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I picked a rain drop from the air and laid it upon your lips. Without hesitation I brushed back your silken hair and kissed your rain drenched lips."


Wow. How did I miss this one. I'm glad I stopped by for this treat of poetry.

[Chris Micha]

I'm honored that you like it!! Thank you Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure, sir...Any time...:).................