Stone of Freedom

I'm trapped behind criss-crossed rivers of broken glass,

A prisoner to a broken life,

The only chance I have is

Putting together a jig-saw puzzle of black & white,

I long to arm myself with the stone of freedom,

So I may breakout of this torment that holds me back,

I will throw the stone until only shards remain

Setting my unimpeded eyes on the vastness of great possibilities

I will settle for nothing less than greatness and love to no end.


In search of 1- Stone of Freedom

Reviews

[W. C. Forrest]

I'm trapped behind criss-crossed rivers of broken glass,
A prisoner to a broken life

What a brilliant poem yet again . You are a natural with word. We are prisoners of fate and destiny. The stone of freedom to break out of the torment represented by glass and longing for love culminated with hope and numerous possibilities. Wonderful. A delightful read my friend.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my wonderful friend! :)

[Sami Khalil]

The idea of the tilte is unique and wonderful. A truth set in stone so to speak. The twin stones of Moses with the law...All this come to mind. Then the poem itself is powerful and liberating at the end from all this cycle that chokes freedom...Excellent...:)....................

[Chris Micha]

So glad you can see the message. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).............................

[Natalie Dieudonne]

"I long to arm myself with the stone of freedom,
So I may breakout of this torment that holds me back."

This line really speaks to me. Really nice piece.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my friend! So glad it touched you! :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Great piece..I can relate to your words, really loved this one :) x

[Chris Micha]

Wow thank you. We seem to share the same things. :)

[Tina Louise UK]

welcome hun :) x