Star of the Horizon

Hope is all we really ever need.

 

 

Star of the Horizon

 

 

Will you lie with me in love

Frolic through fields of seeded dreams

Sleep on soft pillows of spoken words

From the forever waterfall we will leap

 

I can see the horizon of dancing stars

Knowing your eyes light them up brighter

On the water they burn holes

As I watch your soul transform them higher

 

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

So I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

So open your eyes and see

Where the horizons meet

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me

 

I fell into you hard

Not even my dreams were safe

You invaded every part

And filled in all the empty space

 

So,

I wanna be in your arms tonight

Just once is all I need

To guide your heart into me

And I will wait here on the edge

Hanging on every word

Of the world...that

You are to me

 

I know that the miles stand in-between

So,

Just look at the horizon and see

Cause I will forever be

Under the stars of you and me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Quill~]

This felt like a song to me... your rhythmic flow combined with beautiful words are enchanting.
It's the hope of falling into your eyes, into your soul that mesmerize your readers.
I can see the stars, that how amazing you are. :)
Fantastic write, Christian!

[Chris Micha]

It is lyrics to a new song, you're absolutely right, Quill. Your powerful & sweet words go straight to my heart and I shall keep them there, always. Thank you! ;)

[Quill~]

:) I hope to hear it one day...it's in my heart too. :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

This is so romantic! Melted my heart. The first stanza is my favourite.

[Chris Micha]

Romance is my forte lol. Thank you my dear friend.

[ReneeJ]

Where do you get your inspiration from!? I just love how this flows and you are GREAT with imagery and an excellent creator of the right mood :)

[Chris Micha]

Lord Renee, I have probably the utmost insane imagination and all I need is just the slightest inspiration or muse. I really appreciate your comment!!

[maria ( rose)]

Oly cow Christian!!! This is so deep, romantic, Beautifully written. As I was reading..I was thinking to myself,, this could be made into a song..

Star of the Horizon,,A must read!!!

[Chris Micha]

Awe Maria, that really means a lot to me that you would say that. I am truly honored!!

[Ruth]

Helps to remember we are all beneath the sky and the stars shine for us all - lovely write, lightened my heart x

[Chris Micha]

Yes it does, Poppy! I am honored you liked it as much my friend. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this poem...classic love, should be a song...
reminds me of James Taylor...

"close your eyes, you can close your eyes, it's alright"

"well, the sun is surely sinking low, but the moon is slowly rising--and this old world is spinning around, and i still love you"

James Taylor from Mud Slide Slim album

this beautiful poem reminds me so much of that song.because it's wispy and bluesy all at once.

[Chris Micha]

So honored by your words my dear poet. Your words mean a lot especially coming from such a great artist as yourself!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awwww so very sweet Chris.It fairly makes an angel sigh.This is beautiful and sweet and oh so very romantic :)

[Chris Micha]

Just sweet as sugar aren't I lol. Thank you so much for your support, Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes just like sugar lol.You are very welcome :)

[NoelHC]

Well written, and romantic, nicely done Christian.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you my good friend! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

A beautiful romantic poem. There is a sense of magic in the way you write about love. I will mention, however, it should be "lie with me"

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

WOW romantic I love it this is what write all the time I love romance.


Nice work.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece.

Blessings. kindred poet