Bed of Wild Yonder

When thoughts of possibilities take you on a journey.

Bed of Wild Yonder

 

 

Tonight

I journey alone

In a bed of wild yonder

Setting sail on wavy Navy blue sheets

That swiftly drag me under

 

The falling images of stars

Cover my hand as it reaches for you

through the cosmos of my mind

Causing collisions of possibilities

To create desire in the future of time

 

In a dark-deep undiscovered cavern

An enchanting beast dances in love licked flames

Her heart covered in icy disappointments

Its beacon signals out to me to be saved

 

A bridge connects all these together

A lock on each end guards its crossing

Her and I, each hold a key

As we both stand there nervously watching

 

Lost in the reality of our dreams

We both turn the locks in anticipation

Releasing the connecting wormhole

Bridging the gap for loves creation.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Lost in the reality of our dreams
We both turn the locks in anticipation
Releasing the connecting wormhole
Bridging the gap for loves creation.

Well … you do know how to swing a pen. To bring romantic love to the ethereal and divine, first takes a solo dive in it, I believe. Wonderful, wonderful write.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my sweet friend. I am always honored by you, Pryde! :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Christian!

Another amazing poem, my friend! Loved this one!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Jessica :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

You really know how to write. I thought this was wonderfully written :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Taylor :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

No problem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"Wild yonder", I like those words. I like the locations and thoughts in the poem. Dreams allow us to find better places. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Coyote :)

[kublakhan27]

I relate to this on many levels, the main one being the bouts of insomnia that visit me on a regular occasion...the visions you evoke here are more reflective of the things that go through my mind while I lay awake as opposed to what I see when I'm asleep...I wish I could change the order somehow haha Seriously though, I was thoroughly enchanted by this nocturnal journey...another winner my friend :)

[Chris Micha]

Awe bud thank you so much. When such words come from talented individual, it means so much! :)

[Fenix Flight]

this is beautiful!!!! Very well written. Keep it up!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Fenix! :)

[Emily]

I love your wording! Well done.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Emily :)

[MagicAl]

Another great write christian..you really do know how to perfecrly pencil love's wonderful influence. Particularly loved the line "lost in the reality of our dreams"...isn't it just amazing when one gets so enchanted by another.. :)

[Chris Micha]

Wow..thank you so much, Magic. It's an honor :)

[MagicAl]

You're welcome.. :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

The falling images of stars
Cover my hand as it reaches for you
through the cosmos of my mind
Causing collisions of possibilities
To create desire in the future of time

This is my favorite stanza! Not only for its context but also how it was constructed. The words flow so perfectly together...
This really was a piece that took me on a sweet journey of possibilities :)

[Chris Micha]

There's my sweet friend again! Thank you so much for all your support, Nat! :)~

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome :)

[Daydreamer]

Awww!! Perplexed,yet unable to resist the urge to paint the future! Great write,Chris. Your poems are totally lovely! Hope to see you around my profile sometime soon :D

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Manal. I will be!!! I just have tons of RR's. Has a matter of fact, I will do that now! :)

[Daydreamer]

You're most welcome :)! Oh, whatever your time allows you to,then :)
thank you too