Dreaming Dreams

I dream...you dream...dreams.

Dreaming Dreams

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You saw my dreams struggling in a tangled mess

From hundreds of miles away

                 You patiently reassured me that you would love each one            

Freeing them into reality

 

The way you worked them were as an artist would

Sculpting each individual one into an larger than life work of art

It was as if you knew each one intimately

Knowing how to touch them in ways no one else could

 

You've shaped not only my future, but my past

Dreams I've long forgotten, are now lucid again

I've watched in awe as you pulled them from deep within

Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire

 

I often ask myself if I'm dreaming inside those dreams you're making

And little by little life is becoming real inside those dreams

Each dream you put together you get closer to your dream

Where you don't just exist in mine.

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Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a beautiful write, Christian. As always, your work is breathtaking and leaves a beauty in my mind that lingers for hours after reading your work. Here is my favorite line.

"Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire"

Never stop writing. You are an amazing poet. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Lovely romantic write about love from afar.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this, when reading I can see a person helping someone remember their long ago dreams that they once wanted to accomplish and now that the dreams seem to be coming true it is like living inside a dream, that's what I got out of it anyway lol I really love the lines "I've watched in awe as you pulled them from deep within, Throwing them into the air and bathing them in a colorful fire," it puts a vivid picture inside my head, what once was filled with darkness is now sparked into ribbons of bright colorful flames spreading far and wide. I really liked how all of this flowed.

Good Job

[jacob erin-cilberto]

dreams paired up...walking down the street of night, together...complementing each other...

hand in hand, within sleep...and within wake.