1.the introduction

Remember what you do because later On it will bite you in the a*s

Chapter 1 the introduction

I layed there crying drenched in blood wondering
What did I ever do to deserve this s**t!
I mean I never did s**t to anybody. But it seems like
All the bad s**t happens to me! I've been
Hearing lately that n****s around Detroit has been looking
For my pops and wanted his money and wants him dead or at least
Somebody he's close with dead. I really didn't take it seriously
Because that s**t is just life n****s threaten
Each other everyday but actually never really do it.
But I was shocked when all this bullshit went down and the s**t
Really happened! Man all I can say is s**t got real!!

I have a very big family and almost all the men in my family are drug
Dealers! I have 5 brothers and I'm the only girl out of the bunch
But I sure don't act like no girl! Ima lesbian
Stud and I love the same Thang my brothers
Like..p***y! All I have is my 5 brothers and my pops! My mom
Died on a overdose of her Rion when I was just 3
My name is jj and my 5 brothers names are
Tate, jhonny, rico, chaz, and little micheal! Micheal is the baby of
Us all he is 6 years old and has a different mother from us other 4
My brother tate is the oldest of us all he's 36 he just got out of
Jail 6 months ago..he was trying to kill some dude over a b***h that n***a will kill u for any reason he just trigger happy ya feel me tate been locked up for 1 years s**t damn near his whole life
See my brother tate he's into drugs s**t hard like our mom...
He sales them..smokes them..and all the above
But enough about my brother tate now let's get on to my 2nd big bro rico he's 32 now rico he is a straight up hoe lol jj laughed
But I still love my brother though. Rico is my second oldest brother
And he got 9 kids with 7 babymommas..my brother rico is a drug
Dealer and a pimp s**t that's all that n***a knows he be hitting
Them b*****s left and right and to me that makes no sense even though rico is my brother he will betray you and set u up at the same time
Now my big brother chaz he's 30 he has his own business fixing computers! He works for Dell computer lab and can rebuild a computer
That's broken chaz has 3 kids and is married to a man my brother chaz
And his husband Jayde adopted 2 boys and a girl over the years they
Been together. Chaz also has an ex pill habit and pops 3 pills a day
Now jonny my lil bro jonny is something else he is 2 years old now this
N***a jonny will try and get over on anybody he be sale in baking soda
And telling the dope fines it's cociane! Man to be honest jonny goin
To f**k his life off playing with people's money..!
Now my baby brother micheal he is a good kid with a Brite future
And now about me.! I'm jj and I'm a tattoo artist! And I own my own tattoo shop and I always got that good and pills on deck! I'm 28
Years old and I'm a stud! I was born a n***a in a b*****s body
And let's not forget my pops random but the streets calls him ran! My
Pops is the biggest old school drug dealer he has soo many enemy's
He has young n****s make his deals for him he really start dealing
Hard after my mom's death to feed me and my brothers but we always
had what we needed! My dad is 50 years old and still be pulling young
hoez he got a 6 year old son and word around is he got another baby on the way...and life keeps getting more interesting...

the end of chapter one.. what yaw think so far??

Author's Note

Read... it will get good

Reviews

[Robyn]

Really good!! Just a few punctuation problems but keep writing!!

[Olivia]

Really good! Keep working on it

[Jaspar]

Good start. I found it a little hard to read without any punctuation. Very interesting premise. Keep writing.