Loves Eruption...

Loves Eruption...

A Poem by Ivory

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Waves

Envelop my body

I can feel you close

Need to have you near me

Wanting to guide you to my paradise

What waits for you inside?

Pure pleasure

Can you withstand the temperature?

I’m ready to erupt,

Time please speed up

My desire to have you deep inside

 

Overwhelming,

 

Burning,

 

Penetrate my soul

 

I’m begging you

Please love me

Because with you I feel whole

Don’t let this moment end

Promise me…

Never leave me again

 

 

© 2013 Ivory




Reviews

I enjoy the plea and amazingly written poetry...great work my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ivory

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review
: )
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome
Nice intensity and erotic flare.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ivory

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your review : )
Relic

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Thank you for your review : )

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

11 Years Ago

you're very welcome miss :)
Lovely piece it's so incredible you work the true passion into your erotic pieces!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ivory
Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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