Fading Away

Fading Away

A Poem by Ivory
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Part of a writing exercise I have been doing to help spark my creativity.

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Our passion,
a roaring raging river
Creating blustering heat
My desire posses tempestuous wrath
A storm is brewing
With gale that threatens to carry me further away
I reach out, holding you tight
A sudden squall of wind blasts through me
Filling my soul with tremendous pain
Releasing my grip
You fade way..

© 2018 Ivory


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I loved the creativity and visualization throughout your poem. It reminds me of what can happen if you or your significant other becomes to lovingly possessive then he or she could potentially fade away into the arms of someone else. Nice work Ivory. An intriguing read. :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ivory

2 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to review my work.


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this kinda broke my heart a little bit, man. that pain i felt was all too real. even though the poem isn't lengthy, you did such a great job of capturing my attention and emotions with powerful words. don't ever stop writing, please.

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Ivory

2 Years Ago

I’m flattered that you enjoyed reading my work. I had stopped writing for a while, but I found my .. read more
Holding on and letting go.very passionate.the words and imagery form a brilliant tale

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ivory

2 Years Ago

Thank You for your lovely review..
I loved the creativity and visualization throughout your poem. It reminds me of what can happen if you or your significant other becomes to lovingly possessive then he or she could potentially fade away into the arms of someone else. Nice work Ivory. An intriguing read. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ivory

2 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to review my work.

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Ivory
Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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