Windswept

Windswept

A Poem by MsJewel
"

a simple love poem

"
art ~ Gary Benfield



Don’t hasten the winds that tenderly tease

and breathe gracefully, as the falling leaves

rain from heaven, as soft as tears wept

 

Let us float carefree, as wildflowers dance

in a warm embrace, with the ambiance

of beauty, forever, in our hearts kept

 

We’ll gather this breeze, this sweet disarray,

only for two, and here we will stay,

together in love and completely windswept

© 2018 MsJewel


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Julie,
Your words always carry an easy vision for the eye while tugging at the hearts emotions. There is a graceful motion lulls the reader to a peaceful bliss as they read this poem. Well done young lady.
Blessings,
Richie b.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much Richie :) Julie



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Wow, this is such a wonderful and beautiful write, ever so lovely....

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words
Kesch

8 Months Ago

not a problem mam....
a beautiful love poem...and really nice rhyme scheme...you do it so naturally, including the slant rhyme of "tease" and "leaves" and then "dance" and "ambiance"----
the entire poem has that "ambiance"....

j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Simply lovely. I can hear the cadence Julie.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love your flow.

Of written poetry... not the other thing.

That's gross.




Posted 1 Year Ago


Awesome; it's good to read you again -JT

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Leo
very romantic and screams feminine energy haha..and I'm your masculine fountain lol..your words reminded me of my youth and romance..well done
check out angelic girl or dada to see my version of romance as well :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful poetry..............

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
Your writing always takes my mind to a perfect sunny day with blue skies...a place where all dreams come true. Your magical way of stringing the words together to make every one count amazes me every time I read you! ...as soft as tears wept...come on that is just perfection! Well done!! I love this one! Well, I love all your poems!!! Big fan!!
Tabby

Posted 1 Year Ago


still quite edible to read ur work again after such a long span of years, of course. adored the magnetism of these lines: "together in love and completely windswept." excessively deep... & lusciously remarkable as always. worth reading & time investing, as usual. looking forward to your poetry, shortly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love can be a complicated thing; can take many forms; it is also, in its way the simplest of emotions; and for me, this lovely poem captures both the simplicity and complexity that is the driving force of our species.

Beautifully written from first line to last.

Beccy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous words :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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