Emotions

I want to feel deeply
To experience the sorrows and passions
To endure the emotions given
To feel with not just my mind
But my heart if willing
To open the doors
For the one wanting to enter
To implore as to the reasons
I cower
Not use me for pleasure
And toss me like trash
I'm valuable
I'm worth it
If only they'd see it
If only they'd see it...

Reviews

[Elijah Gleaves]

A poem about wanting to feel love. I don't believe you used the word implore correctly I think the word your looking for is inquire. When you say "I'm valuable I'm worth it" you have to make the reader feel your urge to experience powerful emotions one has when they are in love. This poem is good but you can certainly dig deeper into the mind and soul of the speaker. In your poem your supposed to free yourself don't hold back.