Lost For Words

Lost For Words

A Poem by cynicalbeliever
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Kinda short, it's an attempt at being sweet...it'll probably fail. I love you Sammi <3

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A flash of your eyes,
A small smile,
And as you hold me,
For the first time in my life...
I'm lost for words.

© 2011 cynicalbeliever


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Perfectly sweet and beautiful. Simply wonderful write! :) Another 100/100!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

everyone says that poems need to be long and complicated, but this is perfect. a poem can be how you want it to be!

well done!!!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and incredibly sweet :)
For someone who thinks poetry has to rhyme you're getting pretty damn amazing at writing free verse :)
I love you too

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 29, 2011
Last Updated on April 1, 2011
Tags: short, sweet

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cynicalbeliever
cynicalbeliever

Eastrington, Middle of nowhere, United Kingdom



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