Rhinosaur

My momma was a rhinocerous,

and my Poppa was a dinosaur.

When i was born,

i was a mammal in an egg.

and when i hatched,

i drank from my mother's breast.

 

Now i have a predicament,

'cuz the science does want answers.

And i am now the subject.

 

My feet, they are large,

and my teeth, they are small.

My skin, it is leathery,

and my ears, they are smooth.

My eyes they are predator,

and my claws, they are prey.

 

I wander around aimlessly,

unsure of what to eat.

My friends are all afraid of me,

and my enemies all laugh.

I am a hulking rhinosaur,

and nowhere do i belong.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting tale. Create a poor animal with a hard life ahead of them. Thank you for the fun poem to read. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Impressive perspective, powerful atmosphere about it. Great

[Writer *78*]

Experimentation of the human race, as well as the anatomy of the outsider through their eyes. Impressive.

[Daisy Morgy]

awwww bless it but i truely understand that the human race subjectifies diffrent things and instead of trying to understand a better side to it they straight away put it bad. Wonderull write with a lot behind it

[freelancejouster]

that poor little rhinosaur, existing in such a harsh, cruel, twisted world, so much like our own... all because of me.

[Brad]

certainly throws a monkey wrench in the whole evolutionary scale eh?

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

what.. fear sure is hateful, isn't it?