I feel odd...

I feel odd...

A Poem by coldust

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Excruciating it’s emanating..

Why do I feel so much pain, it’s inundating

 

A celebration oh jubilation

What do I need to do, when I feel so much like grieving

 

I have no takers I’m not a heartbreaker

Why am I so looked down upon by my own creator

 

My heart is pounding I have no grounding

Where shall I go, they watch as if I’m a traitor…

 

 

© 2009 coldust


Author's Note

coldust
ignore grammar problems...thnx



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Wow, so much said in so few words. You have truly captured the essence of emotion that so many of us feel at many moments in time. Nice work. Keep it coming.
Light,
Siddartha


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coldust
coldust

gurgaon,india, India



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i'm a p@et by heart & thatz all i know abou myself!!!! rest u guys decide.but first knock 8 my d@@r. let me tell u i'm also a bit amnesiac. more..

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A Poem by coldust