How he feels

How he feels

A Poem by Colleen a Bean

How He Feels
 
Hideing himself away
His black hoodie is his disguise
He hides his scars
He hides whats in his heart
He feels like he is trapped in the dark
Like the walls are closing in on him
He feels worthless
He feels alone
He feels like he doesn't belong
He pushes away everyone that gets close
He always denies peoples compliments
The more he gives up
The more he doesn't care
If the depression gets worse
He could go further then before
He could choose death
He could end up just a mere memory to some
But to the people that really new him
He will never be forgotten

© 2012 Colleen a Bean


Author's Note

Colleen a Bean
I wrote this when I was thinking about my boyfriend one day and I knew it would mean something to him to know someone cares and always will

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i'm sure he was glad to know that someone cares:)
"but to the people that really new him" should be "knew" unless you did it like that on purpose:P

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

lol uh no I didnt haha so thanks :)
this is cool.. i like this..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

Thanks I really like it too :)
You must really love him I hope he liked your poem, because its better than anything I've ever written for somebody.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

He did lol and he really liked my poem loving you that I gave him he even cried probably because he .. read more
Satire69

10 Years Ago

to make a man cry, that is a hard thing to do. Pour guy.
Colleen a Bean

10 Years Ago

lol he gets emotional with me lol he tried stopping when he saw that I had completley forgot about m.. read more

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Colleen a Bean
Colleen a Bean

Grygla, MN



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I am 18 and my name is colleen but my family calls me colleen a bean. I am a senior this year I am in cheerleading, an anti bully group, peer helping, knowledge bowl, LYO, and Drama club. I make frien.. more..

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