How he feels

How He Feels
 
Hideing himself away
His black hoodie is his disguise
He hides his scars
He hides whats in his heart
He feels like he is trapped in the dark
Like the walls are closing in on him
He feels worthless
He feels alone
He feels like he doesn't belong
He pushes away everyone that gets close
He always denies peoples compliments
The more he gives up
The more he doesn't care
If the depression gets worse
He could go further then before
He could choose death
He could end up just a mere memory to some
But to the people that really new him
He will never be forgotten

Author's Note

I wrote this when I was thinking about my boyfriend one day and I knew it would mean something to him to know someone cares and always will

Reviews

[Timeless-Chan]

i'm sure he was glad to know that someone cares:)
"but to the people that really new him" should be "knew" unless you did it like that on purpose:P

[Colleen a Bean]

lol uh no I didnt haha so thanks :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is cool.. i like this..

[Colleen a Bean]

Thanks I really like it too :)

[Satire69]

You must really love him I hope he liked your poem, because its better than anything I've ever written for somebody.

[Colleen a Bean]

He did lol and he really liked my poem loving you that I gave him he even cried probably because he was trying to break up with me but it still touched him and I'm happy u liked it and yes I do really love him he is my best friend :)

[Satire69]

to make a man cry, that is a hard thing to do. Pour guy.

[Colleen a Bean]

lol he gets emotional with me lol he tried stopping when he saw that I had completley forgot about my feelings to take care of him but I just held tighter and told him it was ok lol that was the 2nd time I've ever seen him cry and he never lets anyone in so I'm happy he let me lol