Join me

?umm enjoy?

join me, and die in this place we’ve come to despise

walk with me, a long ways into the night

Regret that i ever considerd my options

take these memories and forget you forgot them

We belong to the light displayed by the stars

One day our dreams will be faded scars

Take my hand and pretend to care

step out of this love which was never there

and i know who i am But its slipping away

this sad sight, you left here with nothing to say

I tried, i swear i tried so hard

attempted to reconcile my heart

Its a lost cause at best, and im giving up

I gave you my everything but it wasnt enough

Author's Note

whats wrong with this one?

Reviews

[Victoria Harlequin]

This poem is fantastic.
I've written things with similar meanings.
Great write!
:]

[Kelley]

2 years 10 years its great!!! Speaks of pain and longing or trying to forget? Anyway great write Jera!!! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow..!nice one...i enjoyed reading it...
great work...
very well written..!

[Jera]

i was just looking to improve it

[justjenn_2u]

I love the hidden meanings in each line. You ask what is wrong with this, I can't pinpoint a major problem.

The lines are deep so I read this several times.

[Looouise]

nothing.