What I've Done Wrong

I look around at everyone

Around me.

Wondering what

I did wrong.

So many things

Too much to explain.

So help me god.

I wish I knew.

All things

I’ve done wrong.

They stare at me.

They laugh at me.

But I don’t know

What I’ve done

Wrong.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

I know this feeling all too well... I was a care-free soul until I moved from MS to GA back in '99 and I started middle school (7th grade) and this poem told exactly my reaction to what was happening to my life... something that has confused me for many years and still sometimes I wonder... 'Why? What did I do wrong?'... so your words feed my mind and ached my heart and brought back memories that are hard to erase, no matter how happy one becomes with life...

Good work.