Rainy Day Divine

Creative Poetry Group. Words given: Divine, Brilliant, Celebration, Swanky, Altruism

Down my steps  into rainy day divine
I remind myself  to mimic the sun
Brilliant, giving of my inner warmth

Through the door, hoping to work like mad
I bolster myself to, proud, imagine
This comestibles counter is swanky

Back under the roof where my heart waits
I recall now, my life's a celebration
Holding my creations tight, I sing aloud

Under the covers in my quieted house
I relive my day, glad, for the point was
Me loving me, not phony altruism

Author's Note

If you do right, act right, and love right... you feel right.

Reviews

[Sourav]

Very well written poem. Liked every stanza and of course, your note. So true.

[cartera]

Mimic the sun. What an instruction. Must beware of Pollyanna though.
Sweet child-like voice, with an easy rhythm.
ATB
Alex

[Ruth]

This is amazingly moving!
You take life by the horns here hon! lol
Excellent poem
xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is a wonderful piece, very self motivational... these are the words anyone looking for inner faith to read. Very uplifting and inspirational...
you are right, you must love yourself first and foremost.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the lifting beauty of your words, and your author's note as well. So true. The words really spoke to me: "My life's a celebration..." I want to live that every day, come what may.

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a great up lifting poem. I am going to have to try to have this attitude more often myself. Thanks for posting in the group and it is good to read your wonderful poetry once again.

[Ed Hart]

right, wright, rite