Hail nature!

Hail nature!

A Poem by costa siwale
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As poets we all love nature and the elements, go green and preserve

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In water's waves
Fire's flames
Air's gusty wind.
Earth's dust
tree leaves
icy chilly feel.

In whis-per-ings
Shiny things
Green grass that sways.
Starring skies
Luna eyes
Even sunny rays.

Nature speaks through all of these,
So lend a listening ear.
And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

© 2013 costa siwale


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I think we do need to listen more to nature, what with the increasing number of natural disasters that are affecting the planet negatively. You picture nature's beauties very nicely. I just hope we don't ruin them.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Simple and wise. Always a pleasure to read your works, Costa.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nicely constructed, Costa.

Nature and the elements, along with emotions, are the poets truest ally.

A very nice, softly flowing write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


costa siwale

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your review. much appreciated friend
Respect, Costa Siwale

I find this poem to be a masterpiece. Your flow is fluent, words represent the nature well and the message if of the vital importance for the human race.

Enjoy your life!

Posted 6 Years Ago


costa siwale

6 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to give your review, very much appreciated Tzu.
Thats so touching!
It's like a soulful music being lend to the ears
Lovely Piece!
Keep up the good work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


costa siwale

6 Years Ago

Thanks a million Pragati, grateful for the time taken to read.
What a brilliant poem. You have used all the elements in the first verse and I love the hyphenated WHIS-PER-INGS .... its just like whisper. Clever you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you soo much
Very evocative describing words. You are quite right, Nature will still be here, even if we all go. But my fear is that, what with pollution and all the destruction, poor Nature might expire! Well written poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

indeed pollution and destruction threatened the globe we live in, how unfortunate that we scar the v.. read more
BRAVO what a lovely poem! It has a lot of emotive power. Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely imagery, and your personification makes me feel as if these things are tangible.

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you for taking the time to read Lonely Shadow..its a pleasure
Great piece of writing! Nice imagery, and I love the final stanza!

Posted 7 Years Ago


costa siwale

7 Years Ago

thank you again, am so humbled

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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia



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