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A Poem by Count Humilus
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"silence of me"

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 Today I woke up

Good enough for him an old man from the retirement home said…

Good enough for me

 

Today I got a text message

It’s over she’s had it with this world

Furious sympathy overcomes this act of selfishness

 

Inside ourselves potential wisdom lets out sprints of inspiration

Exhausted

Slowing down with my hands on my head

 

The sky, the snow, the dirt and the smallest sea shell on a tombstone

I freeze my thoughts with my breath

Lending these thoughts out fore life is only a test

 

 

© 2009 Count Humilus


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fore or for?
Today I woke up

Good enough for him an old man from the retirement home said�

Good enough for me, Try missing a day@!

Nicely done, I like the sentiment, the brevity, the tone, etc...





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