night night

silence of me

 I’ll take a sleeping pill

F**k it…

I smoke 3 joints

And swig a little Nyquil to really feel nice

I am in town for the cold

It’s nice to see actual misery on people’s faces

Scornful looks of the café daydreamers on there apple computers

Lustful looks from the waitress

Nice but stupid

Looking for more these days

Or at least pretending to

Mental hospitals see her with knives on the wall carving god’s name in vain

Cat piss and music

Codes and absurdities

Words and underestimation

Fragile life in an insect’s syringe

Invincibility in a bottle called gin

Beanies and being hooded up

Procrastination and instigation

Lend me a black and white song

Blindfold me

Tie me up

Leave me for dead

Or baby just f**k me instead

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh Dear Count this is going to be your day and your night..you are driving me crazy,ha ha
God those words ,images..how you play on both.i could see so many pictures
one fuse into the other,so i am dazzled to look at them,like my eye sight feel short to see them
my mind feels so hard yet so easy just the same and so nice to read them..you are a wonder
take a sleeping pill,f**k it, smoke 3 joints,take a pill so feel so nice
i am in town for the cold,how nice to see actual misery on faces
scornful looks on cafe daydreamers,and their apple computers
lustful looks from waitress,nice and stupid
cat piss and music,codes and absurdities(oh you see all these here,God)
words and underestimation..fragile life in a syringe
oh what beauties,how clever ,how you stick words together
how you make them shine
and last how i understand you so well
dreamy writes of a dreamer
lovely write..

[Alz Alz]

powerful!

[poetic soul]

lol...
this was a superb write! the last lines were a*s kicking! ;)

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I love the confusion only because it led me to take focus in each and every word of your isolated lines. Very smart and very creative lines!

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

haha i like this u smoke and look lustful hahaha
that sounds like me lol...tho im not lustful wehn im stoned (i get calm)
im lustful wehn im hyper which is every day lol