Father's Day

tiny stories

Those hands

were once big enough

to catch me

as I fell into the world.

 

Reviews

[T. F. Rice]

Very nice

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Perhaps you were small enough to need being caught and now you are held even more securely in the heart. Wonderful Father's Day tribute.

[Alessander]

like another reviewer said, touching, but without being too sentimental or hallmarky. Has an almost haiku feel to it.

[Legion]

Touching. So few words and yet a message that can't be equaled. Well done. I am deeply impressed.