Keeping Secrets

Keeping Secrets

A Poem by Invisible Ink

help with a title?


Pry me open like a clam

If you wish to see

the darker side inside me

for I can not help

but to close tight

when the fisherman

casts his net wide

Dig me up like a root

If you want to find

where my past has spread

for I burrow deep

into the ground

when the logger

tries to cut me down



© 2011 Invisible Ink

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register


These are alluring and yet aloof images at the same time. Nice juxtaposition of open vulnerability and challenging enigma. I enjoyed the write very much.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice , I like it :) Yossi

Posted 11 Years Ago

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


2 Reviews
Added on June 9, 2009
Last Updated on January 4, 2011


Invisible Ink
Invisible Ink


"I guess I wrote in invisible ink, Oh, I've tried to think how I could have made it appear" - Aimee Mann Open the cage and set the bird free. more..