Night

This poem is about the time when your laying in bed, thinking, trying to go to sleep. The time between awake and asleep.

Laying in my bed,
Growing goosebumps on my arms.
Scary illusions in the darkness.
Memories flowing through my head.
Never knew silence could be so loud.
Wanting to scream,

Make some sound.
I’d give anything to leave my darkened mind.
Things I don’t want to remember,
Coming into view.
Hate this time of night.
When all you can do is think.
That time in the night,
Between awake and asleep.

Author's Note

Please comment and tell me things I should fix or if you like it(:

Reviews

[Silent_Whispers]

This poems really well thought out, although reading it feels as if there is something missing. I personally think you could express the language of the poem a bit more, as in, use stronger adjectives to capture the readers imagination. i definitly think this poem has great potential though :)

[ThoughtsOfANemoFish]

I love this. It's so real, and so human. It's beautiful.

[nostal]

Insanely contemplative piece haha thats a good thing btw