Broken Heart

I wrote this when i was lying alone in my room one night. Please review..?(:

My heart is broken.

Body spread across the hard floor,

Shivering in the cold, dark night. 

Bleeding out the only remaining feelings for you.

Every last ounce of my love floating invisibly in a puddle of red. 

Signs of life are leaving my eyes,

Eye lids slowly start to close.

No one to save me from this dreadful pain. 

There is no one in existence to love me again. 

All you do is walk away from everything we ever had.

Memories,

Lies,

The last stride of trust that I had. 

You stole it all,

Ripped it away from me. 

My heart is broken. 

Author's Note

Please review..?(:

Reviews

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I love this more than I can put words into. I feel like this 24/7 anymore. Nice write, you should know you're very skilled and write very well. The way you put emotions down and into your work so easily is breathtaking.

[Luciole]

Beautifully emotional. Awesome job :)

[SheDreamsInTheSun]

I liked this a lot, it was very honest. I think you did a great job.

[Kat]

this is how i felt when i broke up with my boyfriend. this captures that kind of emotion perfectly. really great job

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

omw... why are you making it so hard for me to review your stuf.. your write so awesome that i cannot say anything you ned to change because it is more than perfect like it stands there... i love... no wait... i adore, a love yeah you get it, your work... i will really read hours and hours of your work!

[Cassie Fraga]

lost in stolen emotions.... ouch not a good feeling.
keep up the flow of your writing its great!!