Whispers of Wind

A Vampire story... by Casper Cross...

Author's Note

This is part of a much larger story I worte many years ago when I was just learning the craft. I have reworked the scene, tweaking it just slightly in order to make it a short story.

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Hi Casper: I think you've got this one entered twice. You may want to edit it out. I always love a good vampire story and I think you did a good job. I really liked the paragraph that began "Could it be some evil thing at this late an hour?" It was very good and full of great imagery. I also thought the ending was well written. The image of the blood tear was very good.

[T Hessler]

Hi Casper,
Great job! I usually do go much for vampire stories but yours had me captivated.

The story needs some minor editing, I'll do a quick copy edit for you and send it to you in a message.

You should post more of the story. Did you ever get it published? If not, do you plan to try to get it published?

[ShadowHaze]

oooooooh! I really really liked this!!! It's amazing work! I loved it!! I'm so reading more of your writing... I wish I could write like this... Omg, I loved it!!!!!