Cold as the Hot Ice

Melting on your sight...

Running in my mind,

Following your sight,

Beating my heart rapidly,

like in a cloud nine, O thee.

Walking in the winter,

Shining like a glitter,

Pale as the snow, 

Timid as the mellow,

Mind's full of constellations,

Eyes are like a firework,

Stares like chasing me,

O thee, you're melting me.

In the middle of whiteout,

our feet were on the same path.

O thou, a glimpse of jocund,

you're cold as the hot ice.

We're on the side of polar,

but destined here in wintertide.

Calm as the wind,

Cold as the breeze.

but in the core of us,

it's hot like a fireball.

Blazing inside of our treasures,

Precious among the diamonds,

O thou, a glimpse of jocund,

you're cold as the hot ice.

Seasons passed through us,

but meant here in the wintertime.

Gazing in a flash,

to the stars of mine,

to the eyes of mine,

It melts me like the hot ice,

In a blink of sight,

O thou, swiftly gust like no more,

thus, in split of my memoir,

In spring, I'll step into you,

and say thank you.

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

You've got a knack for conveying emotions well, I can tell that from this. I agree with some of the other reviewers on this piece; the words here have a rather calming effect. Overall, fantastic job. :)

[C_theSurrealist]

Thank you so much for your appreciation.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Tender and lighthearted, these words calm the spirit.

[C_theSurrealist]

Thank you so much!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

You are most welcome.

[Zerohands]

I love it. You're incredibly talented, looking forward for more.

[samarahmed]

i just love all those emotions, you just put them all in a powerful way that made me enjoy..great poem really!

[B-poet]

Loved the emotional energy and imagery as being a prelude for what's yet to come as spring approaches in the midst of unveiling the depths of a treasured memoir. Great work, An emphatic write. :)

[samarahmed]

I loved the attitude of the poem and the way you grabbed me as a reader and all the feelings and descriptions. Great one!