Past - Present - Future

Past - Present - Future:

Chose idle bargain 

believed brazen spy 

followed fiendish lie

hopelessly lost.

Wandering alone

present elder brother

lover unlike another

opening every door.

Usher deep inside

vanquish all sorrows

fill empty tomorrows 

eternity evermore.

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

I like the progression, there's a noticeable maturing in the presented thoughts as they progress.

[John the Baptist]

This one has the flavor of a spiritual renewal to it. Makes me think of the lyrics of "Amazing Grace."

[carl]

thank you for the read and review and yes that was my intent. Glad it came across as such - carl