Time Disappears

Thinking about my forthcoming "Warp Speed into Hyperspace."

Just a moment

then left to guess

what’s remembered

more and less.

Sort the crumbs

bind with string

tomorrow arrives

that’s the thing.

Random numbers

upon the wall

days and days

untill the call.

At the closing

seems so queer

in a moment

time disappears.

Reviews

[Papaya]

It feels like the days and years pass quicker now that I'm older and want to live.
I can relate to your words, and technically your flow is flawless.

[carl]

thanks for your time to read and review, much appreciate your kind words -carl

[Lorry]

Those tomorrow's get quicker and quicker, until all your left with are a whole bunch of yesterday's that get jumbled in your mind, that could have been last week or 20 years ago. The truest sense of getting old is finding yourself saying "it can't be breakfast again, can it?"

[carl]

so very true, thanks, Lorry, appreciate the read and review and you keen sense of the passage of time. -carl