" Nothing Can Be, Less I let it be"

" Nothing Can Be, Less I let it be"

A Poem by Cryingkate
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So..... I,  tell Myself, to repeat after Me
"Nothing can be, less I, let it be"
So Me says: "Nothing can be, Less I let it be."
Myself, chirps in:

"Nothing can be, Less I let it be"

I say's: Oh done so wonderfully !
All of US them asks: " What did I say?"
I says:"We can only be unhappy, if we let Ourselves be"
" It's all a matter of viewpoint!, see?"

If I let Myself and Me, allow Ourselves be unhappy
Then all of Ourselves and us will be.
But just let one think differently
 And it's all over.,Don't you see?

Poor Me say's: "Well how the heck do I pretend to be happy?"
We all chirped in and said: Don't worry about I,
 Just change Poor Me and we'll all live ever Happily.

© 2015 Cryingkate


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Nicest poetry I ever seen or heard I Could be like that it's all about being a free thinker like me.Think of all the possibilities that could be.Be happy it's all in your State of Mind and we are not Blind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

8 Years Ago

Smitty, I'm sending you a Big Fat Kiss and planting it on your cheek. You always make my heart smil.. read more
Pretending to be happy... Why pretend when you actually can be happy. We pretend because we choose to pretend the same as we choose to be miserable or choose to be satisfied or thankful or any other state of mind. IMO... Gleaned from wiser souls.
I see the intention here is good and it follows well the preceding poem in your library here.
The soul is fighting a good fight.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There are many of you in you. I is the subjective you and me is the objective you. Me is when you look from the outside to you. I is when you look from the inside to you.

Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

8 Years Ago

Phillip, Thank You for your insight. You have cleared the muddy water for me.
You made sense.. read more
like the Turtles sang:
"let me be, let me be, to think like i want to, let me be let me be, that's all i ask of you, i am what i am and that's all i ever can be"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

8 Years Ago

Geez Jacob you sound like me. I will have to ask myself to explain it too :-)
Who are the Tur.. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

a 60`s 70`s rock band,put out some good music too !
jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

yes, they did, wordman!

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