Food for thought

Food for thought

The thoughts passing , is passing in a vigorous rate.

cause it ain't to late, contemplate & have faith

S**t gets better and the mind gets smarter

YOU can 

Live as fugitive or die as a martyr

approach head on, 

never let up

Give opponents your lows, they'll know wassup

Knowledge is a big mac, the ones they show 

in a commercial 

Cause everything is fabricated like a rehearsal

So is food for thought

& you already ate something if you caught 

what I'm trying to convey

cause knowledge is what you sought

You thought and I taught 

     

Reviews

[ELKenny]

I like the visual imagery I get from reading this. It's almost as if this poem could be put to a beat. Good job - keep it up.

[Casner P]

The rhyme scheme is quite clever and I like that. I also like that you are showcasing that you are trying to drop some type of knowledge on the reader. You're trying to give us something to chew on (no pun intended!) and I like that a lot, any poem (or any piece of writing for that matter) that makes the reader rack their brain and try to decipher exactly what is being said is clearly well written. Good work my friend!

[SyberRose]

Yes they really blow up those commercials into some gigantic sandwich don't they? ha

[CreativeStroke]

I liked the flow and the rhyme scheme you had going with this piece. Well done!

[Just Kim]

I really enjoyed this one, deep and amazing

[TheGreenestLeaf]

I love the similes you used in this write. Definatly a piece to contemplate. Well done.

[CRZ]

Thank you , well appreciated.