Bliss

Dimmed lights, Music Blasting. 

People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.

Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

All stress seems to go to another location

Cause at that moment, no one could hold it. 

The laughs , smile , dancing and delight.

We were all united as one for the night.

Differences seemed to not matter.

Cause matter of fact, my heart was getting fatter.

No grease though, Just peace yo.

Not to sound cliche

but 

damn that was a good day.

Reviews

[Prritiy]

Felt the happiness you were radiating through this piece.

best wishes

[rutherford]

I can feel the energy of the room released. Wonderful sensation. Everyone wants that moment where they feel its the perfect moment. Well done. Great line, "no one could hold it."

[Matt Sayer]

Dance club euphoria. The inimitable fusion of the crowd into one, pulsating mass. You've expressed beautifully the exhilaration of being one with the music. Excellent poem :)

[Al R. Arce]

I can definitely relate to this piece. As a mater of fact, most people should! Good jon!

[David]

this was awesome very nice job kido

[Anand Sehgal]

People screaming smoothly sounds of joy.
Pure Joy , equal. Both girl and boy.

you have won my heart with these lines. 100/100 :)

[Jeff]

Great work on this poem! Great music transcends.

[Alia ZJ.]

There was so much peace and tranquility in this poem. I really liked it. Thank you for requesting me to read it, CRZ. :D

[Fahmida]

Haha...that sounds incredible. This is very great piece of poem I just loved it. Made my mind refreshed. Thanks a bunch.