Summer

Summer

A Poem by CRZ

Summer time,
                   You feel good , wake up earlier
                   Fellas having bbq's and ladies turn their hair more curlier 
Days are longer and easy to remember 
                                   no December
                              just hot & tender
Where life gives you duality 
its up to you to put it into a     blender 
night time, is the right time
                                      for a family dinner, those dearest to you
                                      just to escape the city lights and get lost in the atmosphere of  the night's presence
                                      to catch a baseball game with crew while drinking some brews. 
                                      to get your lover and show that no other human being is equivalent to the beauty                                                         you are seeing
                                                                  Uhuh

© 2013 CRZ


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CRZ
this one was well thought out.

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Good write... summer is my favorite season as well. Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


You've painted the perfect picture of summertime, my friend. But, alas, I'll admit that autumn is my ideal time of year. Nicely written:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'll take summer any time of the year. Very cool my friend. You have painted it well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It almost seems like it's two poems in one. On the one hand you have the 'summer' references and then you have the references to the 'night'. I personally, would separate the two but regardless there are some good lines and cool descriptions in this one Jason. I liked this 3 line part best,
"Days are longer and easy to remember
no December
just hot & tender"

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful time of year although my favorite is autumn and spring....but every season is nice
for family get togethers ...nicely done:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your rapper type style is fun. I really enjoyed your content in this one. Summer is amazing. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love summer. THis captured it well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice write!!! you have given an apt description of summer.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jason, I always enjoy reading your work, another cool one.
Will

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oof ! What's wrong with December ? But yah Dad would have some neat MENSA parties and everyone would get together and talk and junk and BBQ outside and it was pretty neato. I wouldn't know about that love stuff tho. Girls are weird enough sometimes !


Posted 10 Years Ago



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CRZ
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