don't you know ?

don't you know ?

A Poem by patricia 2010

 

see the drops falling down .

see the writing on the wall .

hear her cry all night long .

hear her pain .

hear her laugh when its rains.

know her heart when it hurts

know her fears .

know her when she crys these tears.

don't you see ?

don't you hear ?

don't you know?

you see the cuts on her.

you hears the crys .

you know the pain she feels inside ever day. 

© 2008 patricia 2010


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You wonder what happens to people like this. The pain can only go away when we admit we have the pain. Very well penned.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a tale of a females inner torment. The cause unknown. We see this, we watch this, We are there when they reach out. but only a female can decide enough is enough and move on past this pain.
This poem is well writen and makes it's point known. :)


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 6, 2008