Love me...If you dare

we are all imperfect,and love is all we have ultimately

Thorns and thistles,
broken glass, sharp needles.
I'll probably disappoint,
I'm hardly perfect.
So go ahead..
Love me if you dare.

Reviews

[stars are far]

Thats confident .. and well kind of GREAt to me ..real GREATNESS..
since i think that no one deserve to be loved .. no MALE... excpet father and brothers..
because they DARE love you .. but they never think twice about hurting you ..they do everything to reach you then they just let you down...

Well,..great thought

[cycy]

yeah, i know just what you mean hun, its like before they have you they are hell bent on getting you then after that its just downhill..if guys made as much effort to keep girls happy as they did to get them in the first place there would be way less broken and angry women out there, but well, its a vicious cycle, the things we do in the name of love. thanks for the review doll :)

[stars are far]

Exactlyy !!!

[Vikrantsingh]

Very venturesome - task to love someone.
Here you have made it very clear by stating its all full of Thorns and Thistles
with broken glass :P

Well very well explained and expressed :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[cycy]

hahahah, well love is a gamble and a risk hey, you never know what the outcome will be but still you dare to take that chance. thanks for the review :)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome :)

[Pax]

~ this tell me the imperfection we all have. A person will love you with everything you are including the thorns and flaws you have. One attribute about love is taking risk. To risk everything in the matters of love.

True loves takes, risk and hard work but after all that it is worth when you know your effort haven’t gone to waste.

Very nice piece.

[cycy]

thank you Pax, and that is so true hey, the greatest risk we take is to love.

[Blue]

Intense and straight to the point. "Love me if you dare" is a sentence worth quoting! Ha, there are too many reckless souls around, though. :P

[cycy]

hahah, thank you Arzel, I'm glad someone thinks a line from my poem is worth quoting :) made my day dear

[Shirlena]

I like this very much cycy...is this another biopic piece? Prickly need love too :).

[cycy]

glad you like it hey, yah..sort of hey, it kinda depicts how i feel about love, though I'm not quite as aggressive as the poem comes across, loool

[Shirlena]

I know what you mean...I have a tendency of writing far more aggressive than I am. lol

[Chaz Hemsworth]

I totally understand. You've put the fact that we all have thorns inside to a beautiful level.

[cycy]

thank you hey

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This is wonderfully powerful and expressive.

[cycy]

thank you very much :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Thorns and thistles,
broken glass, sharp needles

That's what happens sometimes :(. Great poem though!

[cycy]

thanks hey