Love me...If you dare

Love me...If you dare

A Poem by cycy
"

we are all imperfect,and love is all we have ultimately

"


Thorns and thistles,
broken glass, sharp needles.
I'll probably disappoint,
I'm hardly perfect.
So go ahead..
Love me if you dare.

© 2014 cycy


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Thats confident .. and well kind of GREAt to me ..real GREATNESS..
since i think that no one deserve to be loved .. no MALE... excpet father and brothers..
because they DARE love you .. but they never think twice about hurting you ..they do everything to reach you then they just let you down...

Well,..great thought

Posted 10 Years Ago


cycy

10 Years Ago

yeah, i know just what you mean hun, its like before they have you they are hell bent on getting you.. read more
stars are far

10 Years Ago

Exactlyy !!!
Very venturesome - task to love someone.
Here you have made it very clear by stating its all full of Thorns and Thistles
with broken glass :P

Well very well explained and expressed :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


cycy

10 Years Ago

hahahah, well love is a gamble and a risk hey, you never know what the outcome will be but still you.. read more
Vikrantsingh

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
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Pax
~ this tell me the imperfection we all have. A person will love you with everything you are including the thorns and flaws you have. One attribute about love is taking risk. To risk everything in the matters of love.

True loves takes, risk and hard work but after all that it is worth when you know your effort haven’t gone to waste.

Very nice piece.


Posted 10 Years Ago


cycy

10 Years Ago

thank you Pax, and that is so true hey, the greatest risk we take is to love.
Intense and straight to the point. "Love me if you dare" is a sentence worth quoting! Ha, there are too many reckless souls around, though. :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


cycy

10 Years Ago

hahah, thank you Arzel, I'm glad someone thinks a line from my poem is worth quoting :) made my day .. read more
I like this very much cycy...is this another biopic piece? Prickly need love too :).

Posted 10 Years Ago


cycy

10 Years Ago

glad you like it hey, yah..sort of hey, it kinda depicts how i feel about love, though I'm not quite.. read more
Shirlena

10 Years Ago

I know what you mean...I have a tendency of writing far more aggressive than I am. lol
I totally understand. You've put the fact that we all have thorns inside to a beautiful level.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cycy

10 Years Ago

thank you hey
This is wonderfully powerful and expressive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cycy

10 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
Thorns and thistles,
broken glass, sharp needles

That's what happens sometimes :(. Great poem though!

Posted 10 Years Ago


cycy

10 Years Ago

thanks hey

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Added on January 29, 2014
Last Updated on February 5, 2014
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cycy

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