True self

True self

A Poem by Kadessa (Kaddy)

She sits there, just sits there

in the still of the night

Silence fills her ears

darkness covers her eyes

and a lock covers her heart

She feels alone

has been for years

 

Her issue is not being shy

But fear to let others in

For she knows that she is fragile

and her confidence easily dimmed

 

She wants to believe her friendships are true

but knows her friends could care less

she still puts on a smile

and laughs for a while

 

watching everyone fall in love

and wishing she could too

dreaming of a knight in shinning armor

who will never come true

 

In the end,

sjhe acts like nothing is wrong

hidding

masking

her true self

© 2012 Kadessa (Kaddy)


Author's Note

Kadessa (Kaddy)
plz let me know any ways i can make it better
(yes, this is written about me)
<3 Kaddy

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this poem is great and i know how you feel

Posted 10 Years Ago


She sits there, just sits there
in the still of the night
Silence fills her ears
darkness covers her eyes
and a lock covers her heart
She feels alone
has been for years



My favorite line, nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Jan
Kadessa, your knight in shinning armor will come one day and all your friends will be there to support you, love you, and care for you. Our friendship is true, don't forget that, alright baby girl?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jan

11 Years Ago

Okay hold on my phone died so I have to find my charger and if I can then lets get Rebecca and Megan.. read more
Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Okay, I also got 1Ds new red nose day single
Jan

11 Years Ago

Sweet!!!
I think it's great :) you are quite tallented :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


lovely poem, well written indeed, loved here few lines...

watching everyone fall in love
and wishing she could too
dreaming of a knight in shinning armor
who will never come true.......

depthness was seeing indeed in your words. Nice piece, the idea for this writing was really good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


the only critique I have is to change "sjke" to "she". But this was a good read, people could relate to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem is really sweet. I think it's meaningful and I think someway or another people can relate to it.

Great writing.
-PurpleQuartz

Posted 11 Years Ago


watching everyone fall in love...
masking her true self...
Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kadessa (Kaddy)

11 Years Ago

Thx
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...
fix "she" in the 4th to last line, other than that, it's perfect. I think you should let other people in either way, because when I did, I got seriously hurt, we must experience that to know how to make it better, and you know what? I found the love of my life that way. ^_^
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very powerful and deep. make you really think about yourself and other people. well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tags: insecure, true, self, hiding, masking

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Kadessa (Kaddy)

not telling, OK



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i am not the most beutiful girl, i am not the smartest, and i sure aint perfect. but i am me and dont care if you want to be a hater. like any other teenage girl, i am bullied and have self conviden.. more..

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