Cream Puffs

Cream Puffs

A Poem by Hebe
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Hi everyone, hope your having a great summer, have been out of action, but I will be back soon to read all the wonderful verses you have sent me! in the meantime, it's time to have a cream puff!

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I reach for the cream puffs 
fresh fluffy, my tongue doing seductive swirling motions 
seeking the powdered sugar in all the crevices 
I split it in two and there lies the creamy treasure filling in the center
I taste the sweetness the soft cool creamy texture dances on my tongue
my tastbuds stand up in exaltation
I bow in gratitude as the softness of the cream moves smoothly down my larynx 
causing my endorphins to feel warm and fuzzy 
All that remains is the doughy outer shell 
 I devour it with one sweeping motion 
 the slighty chewy salty buttery texture slides down my throat
I move in for the second and third
I know I shouldn't be doing this but ....
I can't stop the sweet and salty combination is irresistible 
does this mean I'm addicted to cream puffs?
they did send Uncle Tom to AA for swigging bourbon all day! 
somewhere in the distance I hear a familiar voice 
what did you do ? 
yikes caught in the act 
Murphy get down!! 
licking the last remnants of sugar off my whiskers I glance at the empty plate 
a few lonely crumbs huddled together in the corner 
time to do my sorry a*s droopy eyelid thing 
maybe I can grab those last crumbs before the plate goes into the dishwasher!







© 2018 Hebe


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Daisy.

I know I have been abasent for a while, and I that I am now getting finally getting back into writing; but this piece of yours is TREMENDOUS. It takes such skill and imagination to create pieces like this, and to make the me feel that I was the dog whilst reading this take immense talent. You have it by the bucket loads. You always have and always will.


For me, one word sums this piece up - SUPERB.

Mark.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Hi Mark.....I've been absent myself, i peek in and out once. In a while. Thank you for you super doo.. read more
I love how you can make a masterpiece from things that the rest of us would see as menial everyday insignificant things. Amazing piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Hi Willa, thank you for stopping by....appreciate your amazing review :)
You took me on a journey of that yummy taste. My soul instantly developed a craving. Very delicious and tempting poem from you, Hebe! I loved this write..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Hi Bala... thank you, poor doggie didn't stand a chance with me around! :)
Mmmm... I need me some cream of puffs, now, hope my cutie, Anastasia the border collie, will not steal it... This made me practically wag my tail in happiness over the quirkiness... Adorably penned...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Great dogs border collies and you gave her a greek name, there must be a story behind that? ... so g.. read more
Photo and words. Perfect. Food is my last great temptation. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Thank you John .... my neighbor makes the best cream puffs I've ever tasted.... i got to them before.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Cream puffs. I could use one and a cup of coffee. You are welcome dear friend..
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Hahaha. And don't i know that sorry a*s eyelid trick!

A very clever write, Hebe. Delicious description of the sensations of dining on such delicacies.

Someone might be getting into a little trouble, but i bet they are very well satisfied! Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Hi Dooley.... they get away with murder don't they .... thank you for stopping by :)
BRILLIANT.. YOU GOT ME!!

Such a cleverness that i'll not details because new readers have to find the delight of your words.. and gloriously put words they are too. And by the way, is early morning here in the UK and i suddenly fancy.. nope.. can't.. but if you insist! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


emmajoy

3 Years Ago

Laughing.. ohhhh darn, just seen them again.. but, as it's you, will forgive.. and mop my chin. Thi.. read more
Hebe

3 Years Ago

Ahhh.. the smell of fresh warm bread with butter, I'm running to kitchen right now! delicious my fri.. read more
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

ARGHHHHHHH just seen those... oh, i need get out of here.. if ever there was a torture.. :) x
yes, this is so very clever & cute. you had me, hook, line & sinker thinking you were talking about yourself until you took a turn & gave it an unexpected twist. i haven't had one in years. now you've got me thinking about them ... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Hi Pete... lol ....it was about me, then at the last moment ot just hit me, glad you enjoyed it :) t.. read more
Pete

3 Years Ago

pretty good. been quite hot & humid up here. was at the beach swimming last evening before the sun.. read more
This is soo cute and delicious Hebe!!
I never thought it will end like this.
A good twist indeed poetess.
Love your works as they are quite different!
Great one!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Hebe

3 Years Ago

Awww thank you so much :)

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